31 Ekim 2010 Pazar




HELPFULNESSES OF UNCONVETİONAL MEDICINE

   We can give a lot of instances about either alternative medicine or positive psychologic mood. Norman Cousin, who became much ill , ‘s therapy is acceptable.Obviously, the therapy is laugh that can be usefull for recovering in the paragraph. Of course, we can say taht there is a truth to the idea.
     As emphasizing in Norman Cousins’s Laugh Therapy,in addition to alternative medicine , that’s important to be in happy attitude. Unconventional medicine isn’t only remedy , but also it is necessary to think positive attitude of getting over. Positive attitude can be laugh, reading funny novels, taking up some hobbies.
    As a matter of taking up hobbies, if a person who becomes ill has hobbies such as playing voleyball, football, basketball, guitar, violin, swimming, listening music,The person can feel perfect. Because  the hobbies have the patient forget his/her illness.
    Also, in some countries, hospitals have watching tw room for their patient.They believe that their patient is so happy and as a result , they who are impressed positively , get over easily.
    Seemingly , as given another example ,too, when a patient who has psychological problems, applies a doctor, immediately, the physician doesn’t give drugs according to patient’s situation. Firstly , the doctor suggests therapy. And then generally, patient feels better and shows signals of recovering.
    In brief, when given the examples are thought , the methods of therapies aren’t ignored.


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                                              Introduction: I wrote my comments about basing on  Norman's paragraph in order to enter in my opinion's ones.
                                            Body:I gave a lot of methods of therapies.
Conclusıon:I mentioned importance of nonconvential medicine....

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  1. I read your essay and ı liked as a draft.You mentioned about good subject and expressed
    with appropriate words.However,there are some errors.But these are not too big to exaggerate.As an example,in the last part,you said:’when given the examples are thought…’Instead you should have said:’when given examples…’ I think.

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